读后续写 | 微技能——精彩结尾佳句

读后续写微技能之精彩结尾

一、哲理式结尾

哲理性结尾往往总结出文章中心思想，并用客观语言表述，它能使作文具有一定的思想含量，能给读者送去一份宝贵的精神财富。它可以通过以小见大、从物到人、由事及理、从点到面、由一及众等方式升华文章主题。

哲理性结尾佳句欣赏：

1. Shy and silent as Abe was, he gave his mum a big hug and whispered, “I love you!” Love may be silent, but it was always there.

2. I believe God is glad to help someone who wants to help himself.

3. Life is full of dilemmas and conflicts, but we should smile and never give up, just like Kelly.

4. She returned the seven dollars and I was sure there was something glorious shining in her eyes. I got to know it is the grace of forgiveness.

5. Many years has gone by, but whenever I look back to that day, I am still grateful for the lesson in forgiveness that she taught me.

6. The thankful words I heard from the boy and the girl after they recovered from the hospital made one thing strike my 19-year-old mind—rose given, fragrance in hand!

二、以景结情

以景结情是诗歌绝句的一种技巧，也是借景抒情的方式之一，可以使读者在景物描写中，驰骋想象，体味诗的意境，产生韵味无穷的艺术效果。在记叙文读后续写中，使用以景结情，同样能以景作结，寓情于景，达到不言情而情无限、言有尽而意无穷的效果。

以景结情式结尾佳句欣赏

1. In the heavy snow, passion and love burnt as they hugged and smiled.

2. No matter how cold the winter was, all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.

3. Everything went smoothly and quietly, so in the dark night, a boy was reading while his mother was eating. Though it was snowing heavily outside, it just couldn’t stop the warmth filling up the whole room.

4. I believe in full blossom, Grandma’s sitting peacefully in the sun, every flower carrying her previous hope, with Grandpa beside her giggling like a child.

5. Being surprised and overjoyed a great deal, Jane held him tightly and told him how much she loved him. At the moment, the mountain was filled with love.

6. The wind murmured in the trees and the sunlight flooded in through the window, warming the whole room, as if the freezing ice was all melted.

7. The crow still fluttered around the window, as the sun melted toward horizon, watching the son hugging sweetly with his dad against the awesome sky.

8. A pair of slim hands giving him a hug, he rested in his father’s warm embrace. Outside, the crow flew away, and the rays of the setting sun shone slantwise (倾斜地) through the trees onto the window.

三、自然结尾

自然结尾是顺着文中所叙之事的自然发展，以它的必然结果作结尾，没有套话，没有空话，简单、自然，可使文章的结构显得十分完整。作为读后续写的文章，常常不一定含有某种深刻的道理，这时只要将故事补充完整就足够，因此自然结尾法是续写故事中最常见的结尾方式。

自然性结尾式佳句欣赏

1. Emma’s eyes began to fill with excitement, like the light in the breaking dawn, with strange radiations of joy. She hugged and kissed her mum again and again, whispering to her, “I love you.”

2. Laughing and smiling, Emma rushed out, shouting, “What are we waiting for?”

3. Satisfied, Mom nodded at Emma, with a joy bubbling from her heart.

4. The smile bubbled from heart showed Mum’s satisfaction.

5. Satisfied, Emma ate the cake, not only because of the surprise, but also for the pride bubbling from the bottom of her heart.

6. Heart beating (racing/pounding) wildly, Emma rushed to her mum and hugged her tightly.

7. Many years later, Abe still held this book. He couldn’t forget how his stepmother loved him.

8. With tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to his mum’s warm hug, smiled and said gently, “Mum, thank you.”

9. With my trembling hands, I opened the envelope, inside which I found seven dollars and a note. On the note there were the words, “It’s for your honesty.”

10. At that moment, with tears, I hugged her tightly, saying “thank you” for her forgiveness.

11. Haunted by a strong sense of horror, I heard Mom screaming, “I forgot the tent!”